Written for : David’s W3 Prompt #80: Wea’ve Written Weekly
Melissa’s prompt guidelines
Compose a series of three tanka;
Following are three “turn lines” or “pivots” (third lines) for each of three tanka, and you must construct the rest:
Turn / Pivot for tanka #1: “I sit quietly”
Turn / Pivot for tanka #2: “Left behind till spring”
Turn / Pivot for tanka #3: “Wild geese preen feathers”
These tanka are to be autumn/winter-themed;
You may write each of your tanka in a single unbroken line of thirty-one syllables, or you may use the five-line 5/7/5/7/7 approach.
rustling leaves scatter
soft breeze amber in color
I sit quietly
a stranger amongst nature
new melodies of silence
change chilled the crisp air
gentle winds time turned tempest
Left behind till spring
poised amidst the storm hopeful
endurance tests faith in fate
nature applauded
mystic their skills to conform
Wild geese preen feathers
across seas steady their flights
freedom never felt … this free
https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/11/08/w3-prompt-80-weave-written-weekly/
Beautifully written. 👏👏
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So picturesque and beautiful Destiny! 💕
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so glad you enjoyed.
thankful always 🤍🙏
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A lovely take! Within changing winds, freedom lets the soul take flight!
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said so well
thank you so much, Warren.
appreciated 🤍🙏
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You’re welcome!
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There is definitely freedom when you’re a stranger amongst nature. Beautiful.
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so nicely said…. so true too.
Thank you, OD 🤍🌹
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Beautiful. These lines especially stood out to me:
“a stranger amongst nature
new melodies of silence”
And then “freedom never felt … this free”
We will never understand the mystery, and yet we see home.❤️
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said so true, Melissa.
thank you for the wonderful prompt.. challenging but enjoyed 🤍🌹🙏
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I’m glad!
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Quietness. Peaceful…wonderful
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glad you felt it so… thank you, Dylan
appreciated as always 🙏🤍✨
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Your poetic weave beautifully captures the essence of autumn and winter. Each tanka paints a vivid picture of nature’s transitions, and the turns add a delightful depth to the verses. Well-woven imagery and emotions! 🍂❄️
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thank you, Ashish. appreciate always your lovely and kind words.
glad you enjoyed 🤍🙏✨
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Smooth, evocative and vivid despite a little challenging prompt. It never felt that pivot lines by Melissa were put in just like that.
Nice prompt and even nicer response.
Thanks, D…
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was a challenging one lol 😬😁
Thank you, J… glad you enjoyed.
appreciated as always 🤍🌹🙏
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Every line flows so seamlessly into the next… Beautiful, Destiny.
❤
David
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thank you so much, David
appreciated as always 🙏🤍
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Hi, Destiny!
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the lovely Jennifer Russo, is now live:
Enjoy ❤
Much love,
David
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thank you, David 🤍🙏
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*hug*
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Tremendous Tanka thanka, Destiny ❤️
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truly thankful, Lesley 😁
🤍🌹
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💗
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Magical!!
Well written
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thank you, Devang
appreciated as always 🤍🙏✨
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Great tanka .. brilliantly crafted 🤗
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thankful always, yassy 🤗🌹🤍
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Love the contemplative tone that led to that last line about freedom, that made me say, “Yes!” 🙌🏻
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thank you, Michele.
a yes for sure 😉🙏
appreciated truly 🤍
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Welcome 😊 Have a lovely day!
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a great one your way too 🌹
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🙏🏻😴🌃
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Beautifully written Destiny
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thank you, Sadje G.
appreciated as always 🌹🙏🤍
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You’re most welcome
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🤍🌹🙏
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🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Wonderful take, Destiny. Beautiful 💕
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Thank you so much, Grace.
truly appreciated 🤍🙏🌹
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My pleasure 💕
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Great work Destiny 💙
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thank you so much. appreciated as always 🤍🌹🙏
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Always welcome love. Enjoy your day. 🌹
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a wonderful one your way too 🌹🤍
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Brilliant ink Destiny .
Such a beautiful poem 💖🤗🙏
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thank you so much, Maggie.
truly appreciated 🤍🤗🙏
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Aww you are very welcome Destiny 🌹❤️🙏
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🌹🤍🙏
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A beautiful poem Destiny and great job on following the prompt! 💗
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appreciate your kind words always, Cindy. 🙏🌹🤞
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It’s always a pleasure, Destiny! 💕
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Loved the poem especially that last verse, truly powerful 💕
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thank you so much, Pooja.
appreciated as always ✨🤍✨
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You’re always welcome 😊
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I admire the your patience and skill writing to rules and regulations.
I don’t even know what a tanka is.
Tanka no thanka, I must be a wanka😂
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-the (typo)
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Sir Poet… I thank you for your words.
the thanka and wanka being the best 🤭🤣
keep sharing those laughs. It is appreciated 🤍🙏🌹
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Welcome! I’ll just stick to free verse 😁🌷😇
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them very much enjoyed 👍😁
🤍🙏
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hahaha.. I am with you!
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it’s a struggle for sure lol 😬 😁
Thank you, dear Cindy.
appreciated so🌹🤍🙏
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We’d never know it.. 😅
aww happy to be here. 💕
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Where? I can’t see you 🙃😁😆
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😹😹
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