Written for : Reena’s Xploration Challenge #306
From Reena : Let the muse take you from dark windows to light, till you see something that resonates with you. So many things keep happening behind windows – of buildings and our minds.
from behind windows dark
we watch the world move by
passing winds sing hello
over cities as free they fly
tempt our thoughts to follow
to reach those depths of high
from behind windows dark
the sky seems far a touch
caged in worlds of glass
to drop to land to stand
even earth seen unseen
from behind windows dark
upon this glass
a touch of light
as true its shine
same soft its glow
so close so now
within reach
its flame
mine…
https://reinventionsreena.wordpress.com/2023/11/09/reenas-xploration-challenge-306/
Close that window immediately
There are too many things behind it, it’s scary.
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Excellent take, Destiny.
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appreciated as always, Indira G 🤍🙏🌹
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❤️❤️❤️
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I love it!
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thank you, Dawn.
so glad you enjoyed.
appreciated truly 🙏🌹🤍
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This is beautiful 😍
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Thank you, Keerthi (lovely name)
glad you enjoyed… appreciated so 🙏🤍
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Beautifully penned! Your words evoke a vivid imagery of watching the world from behind dark windows, capturing the essence of longing and the delicate touch of light. Each stanza unfolds a poetic journey, resonating with the theme of Reena’s Xploration Challenge. Well done!
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Thank you so much.
pleased you enjoyed, Ashish.
truly appreciate your always kinds words 🤍🙏✨
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Such beautiful warmth in your poem, Destiny. Nicely done on the prompt, my friend💕
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Thank you, dearest Cindy.
so pleased you enjoyed 🙏🤍🌹
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It’s a pleasure, always and yes I did enjoy it💕
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Sometimes, I do wonder whether the air I breathes in is the same as one breathes in, in other corner of the world.
Lovely piece, Destiny 🙂
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a profound thought to ponder, Hammad. had me thinking on this for a while…now I wonder too and hope it works so. 🙏
Thank you so much 🤍🌹
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Serenity..excellent
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thank you, Dylan…so glad you enjoyed.
appreciated as always 🤍🙏✨
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😊😁😉
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Good stuff, M 🤗 peace ~ Yasmin~
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thank you, yassy
most appreciated 🤗🌹🤍
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Welcome 🤗 have yourself a gorgeous weekend!
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a great one your way too 🤗🌹
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hi
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🙏
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Lovely!
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thank you so much, Warren.
appreciated 🙏🤍
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Three discreet paras~ i read them as aspirations, willingness to go for those and a state where u actually reach out to…..
I have seen u experimenting with the template more often than not, and every time it comes out good.
Perfect for the prompt, thanks, D..
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summed up nicely… 😁
thank you, J
appreciated as always 🤍🌹🙏
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You slayed it with the last four lines. 👏👏
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thank you, Reena.
appreciated as always… your words and thought challenging prompts 🌹🙏🤍
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🙌🤗
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Wow, this is so incredible, Destiny 💕
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aaaw… thank you soo much, Jennifer. 🙏
truly appreciated 🌹🤍
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You’re so very welcome 💖
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A beautiful poem Destiny.
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glad you enjoyed, Sadje G.
most appreciated 🤍🙏🌹
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Always a pleasure
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Another heartwarming response to this prompt Destiny. Love it! 🥰💖😘
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thank you, dearest Kym. appreciated always 🌹🤍🤗
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You are so very welcome Destiny! Have a FANtabulous week my friend. 🥰💖😘
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same your way, dear Kym🌹🤍
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😘💖🥰
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Love the hopeful ending. ✨ An enjoyable journey, you took us on!
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was glad to have you along 😁
very much appreciated, Michele 🙏🌹🤍
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I love it Destiny! 😍🌺
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aaaw… so glad you do.
Thank you so much. appreciated as always 🙏🤍🌹
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My pleasure ❤️
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Wow ,Wow and wow!!!! Stunning my friend 🌹❤️
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aaaw…. always appreciated, your words, Maggie. 🤗🌹🤍
(with these WP issues, hoping I’m not missing posts of yours…)
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You are most welcome Destiny, always 💖🙏💖
I did not post yesterday🙄, but I have today.
WP it seems is not firing on all cylinders 😪
Modern technology 😄
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I did notice your post missing😁
as modern as it gets, Maggie 😬
to yours now 🤗🌹🤍
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🤗🥰🤗 indeed like something out of the arc🙄
Thank you Destiny 🙏💖🙏
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I love to enjoy your feelings that you transmit in your lyrics.
Have a nice day, Destiny. 🤗🤗
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thank you kindly, Lincol.
glad you enjoyed as is truly appreciated.
a great day your way too 🤍🌹🙏
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Wow, such a great poem. I loved it 👏🏽
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thank you, Pooja.
glad you enjoyed and
appreciated as always 🤍🌹
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You’re so welcome ☺
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goregous Destiny! So expressive! 🤩🤩😙
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aaaaw…thank you dear, Carol.
so glad you enjoyed 🤍🙏✨
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From behind windows dark
I quickly realise
I really need to clean them 😁
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🤭😂🤣
from behind windows dark
if you clean your windows right
you too will see the light 😂
Thank you, Kind Poet 🌹🙏🤍
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Good reply 😁
Welcome Tiny D 🌷
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I love the repetition.
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aaaw.. thank you, Feets 😁
so glad you do as is always good to hear from you 🤍🤗
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