Written for : Reena’s Xploration Challenge #304
From Reena : The prompt this week is a collage. You are free to use any one or all elements as a muse to write your piece. Bonus points if you can weave the elements together in a theme.
If only…
said given our destiny
for us to carve as liked
granted the power
to make true
that which we write
words to control time
to return mankind
to what be it should
write erase rewrite
will we… can we… if we could
create a world in which
we as one will live
smooth this time’s flow
each grain a gem so precious
never to be held again
now upon a crisp clear page
with every new ink drop
we write into existence
a world where finally
the silence falls,
erasing all separateness
and we live…
if only…
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“If only…that which we write…could…”
What if it can, and all we gotta do is keep writing? Who knows, may be someday.
Beautiful one like always 🤍🤍
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“what if it can.. ”
always encouraging your words, Shadia.
maybe someday… 🌹🙏
Thank you so much 🤗🤍
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Powerful piece ❤️
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Thank you, Kajal.
appreciated so 🙏🤍🌹
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Such if only are really Heartbreakers.
A lovely piece 🙂
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sometimes true too.
Thank you so much, Hammad.
appreciated 🤍🙏
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Write erase rewrite, that’s what nature can do 😛
Great poem Dy
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nicely said, Devang. does seem so😉
Thank you so much 🙏🤍✨
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I’m seeing a docuseries and that shows 3 mass extinction done by nature
Like 250 millions years ago, earth was not livable.
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interesting those to watch…some scary too.
let’s hope we can keep it livable 😬
🤍
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Yeah 🙂
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🤍🙏🌹
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If only indeed, loved the thoughtfulness of the poem and yes if only we were in charge of our own destiny- wouldn’t life really be something? 😅
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lol… I worry about you, Pooja… being in charge of your destiny… thinking back to the basement story and all therein similar 🤭🤣
Lol, just kidding 😋
Thank you so much… indeed, it would be something 😉🤍
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Lol, don’t worry my basement is empty 😅 You’re so welcome 😊
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🤍✨🌹
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I think the most appropriate comment to this beautiful wish can only be an Amen!!
Thanks always, D….
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thank you always, J
Ameen🤍🙏🌹
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Beautifully written.
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thank you, I.V.
glad you enjoyed.. appreciated🤍🙏✨
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Thanks for sharing this idea and very with this destiny. Anita
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thank you, Anita 🙏🤍
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write into existence..beautiful.
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so glad you enjoyed, Dylan.
appreciated as always 🤍🙏✨
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😉😁😊
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😂🙏🤍
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wonderfully penned. Love this last line,. “cthe silence falls,
erasing all separateness
and we live…”💕
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thankful, dear Cindy… for your always kind words. glad you enjoyed as appreciated so🙏🌹🤍
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You’re so very welcome always, Destiny💕
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I f only this dream becomes a reality. Beautiful wish.
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ameen we say, Sadje G. 🙏
Thank you so much.
most appreciated 🌹🤍
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Aameen! 🙏🏼🩷❤️
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🌹🙏🤍
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Beautifully profound Destiny 💕✍️💕
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thank you so much, dear Maggie.
appreciated as always 🤍✨🙏
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Aww you are so welcome dear Destiny.💕🙏💕
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🤗🤍🌹
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“The power to make true what we write” will make me feel so conscious and responsible for what I write.
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your words so true… that consciousness needed too.
Thank you, Reena… appreciated always 🙏🤍✨
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destiny, this is such a wonderful piece! You wrote it beautifully!
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aaaw… thank you so much, Carol.
so glad you enjoyed 🙏🌹🤍
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A thought-provoking piece that beautifully contemplates the power of words to shape destiny and create a world where unity prevails. The imagery of writing into existence a world where silence erases separateness is truly inspiring. Thanks for sharing this poetic reflection. 🌟🖋️
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thank you for your time and kind words, Ashish.
glad you enjoyed and appreciated so 🙏🤍✨
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