Written for : Colleen’s 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 18, 1/23/24, Part I, Deep Cold (January 20 – February 2) Daikan
from
drenching
summer storms
to late after-
noon sunburst yellows
earthy scents rise fresh to
senses the delights of times –
night falls to a pleasant breeze from
the coolness of far off twinkling lights
Kigo phrase : coolness of far off twinkling lights
Destiny, you’ve taken me on a journey through changing weather patterns, from the intensity of summer storms to the soothing transition of late afternoon! Wowzers! ❤
~David
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glad to have been able to, David.
thank you as always 🤍🙏
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Your descriptions are delightful, Destiny
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thank you, Robbie. so appreciated 🤍🙏
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Beautiful 💜
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thank you sooo much, Willow 🤍🙏
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Always my pleasure 💜
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This is lovely Destiny…. our earthly scents rights now are mud on wet dog! Hardly like those of summer – I can almost share the smells from your poem – thank you 💞
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glad to have been able to share, Suzanne… wishing some summer peeps your way…. thank you sooo much 🤍🙏
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So beautiful
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thank you, Lynn… appreciated as always 🤍🙏
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That’s an atmosphere I would welcome right now! (K)
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it’s a delightful one… strangely we having much of them, K… Will try and send some your way 😁😉
thank you sooo much 🙏🤍🌹
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Thanks!
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I love a good summer storm and the smells of the wet grass afterward. Great poem, Destiny!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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after storm nature’s wonders, lovely true… thank you, Yvette.
appreciated… your time and visits here🌹🤍🙏
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So lovely, you are a master of this form Destiny – lovely 💕
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thank you, AJ… so appreciated and humbled 🙏
it’s been a favoured one and a lovely one to work with😁🤍🌹
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Lovely!
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thank you, Nancy. glad you enjoyed 🤍🌹
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Beautiful etheree , Destiny. ❤️
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thank you, Gwen… so appreciated 🌹🤍
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Earthly scents 😊
Loved the poem Destiny 😀
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and glad you did, Devang 😁
Thank you as always 🤍✨
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Well good morning to you sweet child
What are you up to today?
It’s like night for you, you awake or not sleeping?
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good morning, dear child.
Its early morning here close on to 4am… up to start the day 😁
and your side?
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Yes I saw your time
That’s why I asked, it’s very early.
Rater late night.
You are supposed to be sleeping, yet here you are surfing online
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better to rise before the sun😉
4 in the morning is a good hour to wake… can’t be missing time in the day 😁
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Even sun is sleeping at this hour 😜
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true, it is 😁😂
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Beautiful Destiny! 🌻
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thank you, T…. appreciated as always 🤍🙏🌹
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🧡🧡
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I love the lines praising petrichor; beautiful —
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appreciated, John… and thank you so much 🤍🙏
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well said
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thank you so very much, Waleed. 🤍🙏
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Sweet response to this prompt Destiny! Love it! 🥰💖😘
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thank you, dear Kym. appreciate always your time and kind words 🤗🤍🙏
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You are so very welcome Destiny! 🥰💖😘
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🙏🤍🤗
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Love this Destiny 💕
So beautifully written my friend 😊👌
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thank you sooo much, Maggie. as always, so appreciated 🤗🙏🤍
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You are so welcome Destiny 🙏 always 💟
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🤗🌹🤗
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Beautifully written Destiny. Your weather is the reverse of ours.
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Summer is favoured 😁 though it seems to be confusing itself with Winter a little this year 😬
Thank you, Sadje G. most appreciated 🤍🙏✨
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Yes the climate change is very much evident all over the globe.
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sadly true… 🌹🤍🙏
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🙃🙂
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Excellent! 👌🏻 I like a bit of twinkle ✨
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glad you do, Sir Poet…😁
and appreciated too ✨🤍
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You’re welcome Dez 🌹
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🌹🤗🤍
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Makes me feel warm and happy…..sweet….
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am glad, Dylan… so appreciated 🤍✨
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..you are so very welcome Destiny….
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✨🤍✨
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Beautiful
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thank you… so appreciated 🙏🤍
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The title itself rings a poetic bell into the ears. Very emphatic and imagery indeed.
Thanks sincerely, D..🌹🌹
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so nicely said… and so glad it does…
thank you, J… always appreciated
🌹🤍🙏
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Very, very creative, Destiny. Love it!
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Thank you, Kevin 😁
so pleased you do 🤍✨
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❤️❤️
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🌹🤍🙏
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I loved that phrase! It was so magical and you did a great job speading that magic. ✨
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I thought so too… really a magical one.. thank you, Colleen. so appreciated 🤍✨
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You’re most welcome. 🙏🏻
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Wonderful, Destiny.💕
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thank you, Grace. So glad you enjoyed 🤍✨
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My pleasure. I did indeed 💕
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noon sunburst yellows
earthy scents rise fresh to
senses the delights of times –
I love theseee lines
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sooo good to hear from you, Al 🤗
glad you enjoyed… thank you 🌹
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