Written for : Reenaβs Xploration Challenge #281
Reena’s message: Letβs see how you choose to open and decode this message π
I shared with the stars
my dreams and wishes
they winked at me
yet promised nothing
I mumbled to the moon
of my pain and fears
it shone on me
yet remained silent
I screamed to the skies
tales of woes
it sheltered me
yet refused to reply
across the skies
carried by stars
delivered the moonlight
A sealed envelope
my heart knew
my soul understood
a little bit of heaven
lay within π€
sealed still
to – be – read
when I do
I promise to
to share ππ
read with a smile, words
to understand , messages
dropped ~ from me to you πΉ
Gratitude : Thank you, Tanmay… for allowing me to steal your lineππ€
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Lovely and dreamy. I like this one a lot Destiny.
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aaaaw… heartfelt thanksπ€
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Lovely piece πΉπ
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Thank you, Myriam. so glad you like π€π
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Beautiful
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no long stories from me today π
Rest that arm.
Thank you, Brendaπ€π€
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Well it seems a household story ( complains, not heeding, hearing, denying, promising, screaming etc.) of the universe, star castellation or the solar system. LOL…. I wish “more than a little bit” of the heavenly happiness inside the envelope. Thanks for sharing.
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does seem so… household story.
Thank you kindly for that wish…. always appreciated, Jπ€πΉ
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A message for the right time, Destiny! π
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ah… something like that, it seems π
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Aha intriguing!!!
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will share when I open itππ
Thanks, Devangπ€π
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Keep me updated
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Beautiful poem, Destiny! π€
What a creative prompt, too.
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Thank you, Braden. Happy you enjoyed.
Head over to Reena’s and give it a try. You know you want toππ
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The pleasure was mine in reading it. π
Youβre too right – I was already playing with the ideaβ¦ π Iβll go check it out!
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Awww…such a lovely heartwarming poem Destiny πΉβ€οΈ
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thank you, Mich. so appreciated π€β¨π
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Reading this I remembered a story of a one Kenyan pastor Robert Burale.. he suffered so freakinβ much to a point he tried to exist the world 3 times. But then one day a friend got him a cd πΏ of a preacher who said, βhave you been waiting on God? Well, God is waiting for you at the finish line because he expects you to win the race.β I think most of the time we pray and hope but nothing changes until you do something about it.
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An intriguing and inspiring story you share, Shadia.
It is always said, “God helps those who help themselves”. I believe this too.
Grateful for your lovely words and time to share.
Thank you, truly π€β¨π€
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A beautiful and poignant poem, β¦magical really, β¦and tantalising in its ending, β¦weβre left wanting to peek into the envelope, see the words/secrets held withinβ¦..enjoyed reading this Destiny, β¦β¨πβ¨
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if I dare open, I shall shareπ
truly appreciate your wonderful words, Penn. happy you enjoyed π€β¨
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I’m so proud of myself now. You transformed my line into something amazing! Beautifully done, Destiny π
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glad you are for you should be π
… and thank you, too. much appreciated π€
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Beautiful and so evocative Destiny. π«ΆπΌ
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always grateful for your lovely words, Sadje Gππ€
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My pleasure dear friend
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beautifully expressed Destiny! π
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heartfelt thank you always ππ€
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Kind of deep!!
Loved itβ€οΈ
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some messages are such π
thank you, Vidah. So glad you like π€β¨
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Awww, it’s such a beautiful poem!!! πβ¨οΈ
I literally love each line of itππ
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thank you, “good” Anjali.π
I’m glad you do. very much appreciated π€β¨
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Lol! π
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This ‘good’ thing is getting a bit embarrassing now ππ
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aaaw… but you asked with the “puppy eyes”ππ
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My bad! π₯Ίπ
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
Sealed envelope …. by Destiny
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Poignant composition!
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Thank you, Reena. always appreciated π€π
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