Written for : Sadje’s What do you see # 178- March 20, 2023
fragments of broken
thoughts scattered across skies in
flames of fiery red
enraged emotions
disperse their fury, stains the
sky with agony
grayish clouds hover
envelops the roaring flames
embraces its torture
now wrapped in comfort
tired and spent, the fervid clouds
gather its fragments
tears shall rain, torrents
will flow, as the fiery clouds
finally let go
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Great poem!
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Thank you, Nicole. much appreciated 🤍
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An emotion charged write, Destiny! Awesome. ❤️
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thank you so much🙏
your time to read and comment is appreciated 🤍
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that was such a beautiful read, Destiny.
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thank you so much, Audrine. Much appreciated ✨🤍
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this was a really good poem!
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so glad you think so. Thank you so much🤍😊
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Your poem packs so much explosive imagery, Destiny. Just…wow!! 💜😊
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aaaw, a heartfelt thanks, jai😊🤍
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Always my pleasure, Destiny. 😊💜
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It’s raining as I read this, perfect timing I guess 😅
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and we know how the rainy weather makes you sleepy 😋
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much, Pooja🤍✨
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Haha yes it does 😅
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😉🤍
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And when such clouds unloads, it ain’t normal showers.
Wonderful thoughts for WDYS 🙂
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agreed 😁
Thank you, Hammad. Always appreciated 🤍
Ramadan Mubarak to you and your family ✨
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Ramadan Mubarak to you and your family as well 🙂
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storms come and go as we all know
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Absolutely do love the variety of emotions expressed in this poem ❤️ It strikes a chord!
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Thank you so much, Aboli. So glad you do✨🤗
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The complete cycle of emotions through the perfect metaphor “nature”. Vivid narration and beautiful simile, who would ask for more! Thanks a lot.
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Thank you, J…
always appreciate your reads and time to comment 🤍✨🤗
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Powerful take, Destiny. Amazing imagery . Love it.💕
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thank you, Grace… very much appreciated 🤍✨
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Truly my pleasure 💕
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🙏🤍✨
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Oh how i adore your imagery here Destiny🌹
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Thank you so much, Mich.
much appreciated 🤍✨
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Wonderful!!! ❤️🤗
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Thank you so much, Giada. Always appreciated 🤍🤗
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Emotions well weaved into words!
Amazing share😊❤
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thanks, Vidah. your lovely comments are always appreciated 🤍✨
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🤗❤
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Such an emotion filled poem Destiny. Beautifully written! Thanks for joining in.
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thank you, Sadje G…for your always kind words and lovely prompt 🤍✨
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It’s always a pleasure my friend
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✨🤍🙏
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Fantastic response to an incredible photo prompt!
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glad you think so😁
Thank you… very much appreciated 🤍
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❤️
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What a storm of emotions. Your words are like thunder, Destiny. I can hear them roar.
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I’ve been practicing the roar 😁😂
Glad you think so, and thank you so very much, Tanmay.
Always appreciated 🤍✨
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